Online Message Review
What Are Your Online Words Expressing to the World?
The words we put out in the world speak volumes.
They don’t just say what we think they are saying. They communicate on multiple levels. They show where we feel strong and where we feel weak. They show what brings us alive, and where we are confused. They show what we are ready to own and claim about our work, and where we are trying to please.
Any piece of writing potentially reveals what you are most passionate about and where doubt or fear are clouding your communication.
Get My Intuitive Hit on Your Message
My name is Isabel, and I have an unusual relationship to language. Words speak to me. I hear what is and what isn’t being said.
When I read your current copy, no matter how rough or polished, I often sense what the real message and story is you’re here to share, whether or not you’re stating it outright. I can quickly spot when you’re on target or when you’re drifting off the mark. I can see what you absolutely want to keep, and what you can quickly change to have a more powerful presentation.
I’ve been specializing in this kind of “core message” communication work for over nine years, and I’ve helped many coaches, consultants, authors and speakers to find the words they need to rock the world.
Because It’s Not Just Your Message – It’s Your Mission
Bringing your real message forward is an act of courage. It can feel vulnerable to ask someone to not only read what you’ve written but to tell you what might not be working so good.
But it’s also a tremendous relief to no longer have to figure this all out yourself.
Let me assure you that my feedback will be delivered with tremendous respect, kindness, and enthusiasm for what you bring to the table.
You’ll have the confidence that comes from bringing on an outside perspective to help you spot the holes and inconsistencies in what otherwise might be a great presentation.
You’ll get concrete, practical suggestions about what you can do right away to bring more of the beauty of your message forward – a necessary step to your being seen and celebrated and rewarded for what you bring to the world.
How the Online Message Review Works
This Online Message Review focuses on the clarity and power of the message at the core of your business, rather than on the structure of your headlines, call to action, or bullet points. My work focuses on the powerful and passionate ideas at the core of your business: the compelling beliefs that define what you are here to do and the articulation of your original and personal process that shapes the content of the programs, products, and services that you offer.
When you get an Online Message Review:
- You’ll discover where your message shines, and where your passion and clarity are getting muddied
- You’ll pinpoint the most successful and effective language you are using
- You may discover there is a better order or arrangement of the information on your site
- You’ll be directed to expand where your energy and passion are strongest
- You may have a crucial aha that gets you focused and moving forward in a more powerful way
When you sign up for your Online Message Review, you’ll direct me to your web site, and to the key pages you want me to review. (And if you don’t have an online presence, but have other materials for me to review, that’s ok too.) In short order, you’ll receive:
- a written report evaluating your online message in 10 key areas
- a written summary of what I saw in your site, including my favorite language, what is working, and the key points for improvement
- a short private video summary where I can elaborate on points that are trickier to address in writing
- a 15-minute phone session with me to answer any questions you have about your review (and to consider if there are next steps we’d like to take together.)
Using the information you receive, you can quickly implement the changes yourself, or enlist my help in developing the foundation of your message and your personal “book of language”.
Get the Direction You Need to Move!
People who have experienced the Online Message Review appreciate being able to turn around and make immediate changes in their web copy. I am often able to pinpoint places where they were holding back, trying to please, or straying from what they most wanted to bring forward.
$100 through Friday, June 11. $200 after that.
The Online Message Review is a great way for us to get to know each other. It’s a way that I can show the kind of input and guidance I can give you, and you can see if I am someone you want to do more work with That’s why I charge less than my normal rates for this get-to-know-you experience.
“Isabel’s Online Message Review helped me in three important ways: confirmation of what IS working, laser-like focus into what is fuzzy and unclear, and the biggie — her ‘intuitive hit’ that perhaps I wasn’t conveying my biggest deepest message. I liked the report categories and numerical ratings; they gave me clear, specific feedback that I could act on. The real bonus was the accompanying video of Isabel sharing her frank perceptions in a gentle, genuine way. Within 24 hours I was able to rewrite my site and feel really good about it.”Lois Kelly, Corporate Rebel, www.foghound.com
“Isabel, it was so useful to have someone with totally fresh eyes look at my site and help me figure out where my copy was working and where it wasn’t speaking for me the way I wanted it to. I appreciated our discussion about how to make the specific methodology I use – Neuro-semantics – come alive for people through a more personal way of talking about it.
Plus, your question about whether or not this was my biggest, deepest message was on target. Your intuitive hit was that there was a more concrete, specific message that could come out of me. Since then, I’ve finally found my ideal client: I’m now the Get-Out-of-Your-Own-Way Expert for Introverted Entrepreneurs. This is totally me and allows me to show up powerfully in all my shyness.”Dr. Irena O’Brien, The Get-Out-of-Your-Own-Way Expert for Introverted Entrepreneurs, http://irenaobrien.com/en/